This is some feedback I got for the rough cut 14 from our teacher. If these are done, then the next one should be the final cut.
1.16 the fist seems a bit too much, try to layer with something else where he is not singing
1.20 try and put the cream fight in slow-mo and keep the pool shot layered until 1.26
1.35 reverse the shot of the singer jumping and the singer running
1.44 cross-cut the shot of the layered guitarist